Excellent composition display
Three man basketball game
By Lin Shen Gao
Grade four
Instructor Zhang Jingming
"Cheetah, come on! Break through! " In the basketball hall, the audience screamed all the time. The shouting was deafening. It turned out that there was a basketball training match for three of our basketball club!
Wei taught Xiao Zhu, Xiao Zhang and Xiao Bao first. You know, Zhu is the "little cheetah" in our third and fourth grade. Although he is thin and small, he is a "famous general" in the basketball court. Even if he has "heavy" defense, his three-step layup hit rate is quite high. Later, the coach ordered Xiao Chen, Xiao Lin and my first team. After the two teams were divided, everyone began to work hard - wrists, knees, shoulder blades Then the two teams enter the arena, meet and clap, recite the action essentials in their mouths, and prepare for a decisive battle.
In the eyes of the audience, the game began. Look! Chen immediately took the lead, rushed to the free throw line from the other side, and I quickly moved to the basket. At this time, "cheetah" was in front of Xiao Chen exactly. Fortunately, Xiao Chen reacted quickly and "swished" the ball to me. Catch the ball, turn around, shoot, go in! Score 1-0! The audience in our class were so excited that they clapped and some even stood up and cheered.
The other side still didn't score a goal, and the audience's expectant eyes turned to the "cheetah", waiting for him to fight back. I saw his brow locked, his face red in thinking about countermeasures. All of a sudden, his eyes lit up, holding the ball, firmly toward the center line, ready to serve. This time, "cheetah" is different from the usual, not in a hurry to shoot the ball all the way to my front, stop. I open my arms and defend on my side. All of a sudden, he accelerated, moved under the basket, his back to the basket. "One, two, three!" He turned around, using a move that coach Wei didn't even teach him - a beautiful hook shot, he actually put the ball directly into the basket!
The score is flat, the game is stuck, we serve in the middle line. I saw Xiao Chen hold the whole ball tightly, his toes moved quickly to the left, and his head also moved to the left. This is our strategy: fake action. After all, Xiaobao, the opponent's defender, is still a rookie. He is not familiar with our routine, and his focus has been completely deceived to the left by Xiaochen. At this time, Chen snapped a V, blocked each other with his left hand, and ran straight to the basket, leaving baoleng in place. I thought to myself: it's great, it's a goal to be scored! Can turn to think: small Chen runs slowly, can be same as last time again be stopped by others? Oh dear! "Cheetah" rushed up! I hurried to get ready to take over. Suddenly "bang when" a, Xiao Chen lost center of gravity, the ball flew out, and he fell to the ground. I cried in my heart: such a good opportunity. How can I lose it to him like this? At this time, I was surprised to see "little cheetah" put down the ball he had grabbed, turned around and hurriedly ran to Xiao Chen and helped him up. I can't help but praise his high demeanor!
In the next game, the score of the two teams went up alternately, but in the end, the other team won the game with a total score of 8:7 by virtue of the speed advantage of "little cheetah".
After the game, I jokingly said to the cheetah, "you come to be our basketball coach and teach us!" He smiled and said with a hint of shyness, "my level is only average!"
Looking at his sincere smile and thinking about the fact that he gave up the chance to score on the court to help up his opponent, I have deeply realized how rare and precious the friendship between our teammates is due to getting along with each other day and night! Friendship first, competition second!
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Teacher's comments: Lin Shen, a basketball fan at first glance, carefully observed the movements and expressions of the players in the game, and unfolded detailed descriptions to create a tense atmosphere for the game. The most wonderful place is the "game aid" of "little cheetah". The little details are really touching. The image of an introverted, kind and skillful basketball player appears on the paper. At the same time, it sublimates the theme of the paper: "friendship first, competition second!" I hope that all the children can strengthen themselves and gain friendship in the happy games!
Course overview: this exercise corresponds to the wonderful moment (I) - learning to write activity composition, the third unit in spring of the fourth grade of New Oriental textbook "reading and writing of blog". Fourth grade students have learned a lot of ways to write activity articles, but they still fall into the "Journal". The focus of this unit is to teach students how to select materials, that is, to grasp typical materials - typical scenes, typical characters and typical cases in activities or competitions, rather than all aspects. Activity composition is a kind of composition which is often tested in the examination. From writing a detailed and appropriate activity composition with prominent center to reflecting personal perception in the activity composition, there is another obvious gradient, which requires students to pay attention to and study.
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