In order to comprehensively improve the students' writing level and help the college entrance examination composition, we specially invite Gao Chaojun, a famous composition teaching expert in China, Professor of the school of Arts of Nanjing Normal University, and his service team to guide and plan the composition improvement plan for the teachers of senior high school Chinese grade group and lesson preparation group in the province. The scheme is divided into two parts: Students' improvement plan and teachers' training course activities.
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About Gao Chaojun
He is a famous composition teaching expert in China, a professor of the school of Arts, Nanjing Normal University, vice president of China Modern Writing Research Association, vice president of Jiangsu Writing Association, and the main person in charge of composition marking in Jiangsu college entrance examination. He has been employed as a course guidance expert by many key middle schools, and has given hundreds of writing lectures in Beijing, Shanghai, Tianjin, Taiyuan, Jinan, Shijiazhuang, Haikou and other major cities of the country as well as all over Jiangsu, which is well received by teachers and students.
Gao Chaojun, author of composition study plan
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1. Student improvement plan
In order to improve students' writing quality, we should have good teaching materials. "Composition study plan" is divided by grade, which is consistent with the requirements of the new curriculum standard. It integrates writing interest, writing thinking and writing literacy. It includes all the theme activity units of "writing, oral expression and comprehensive learning" in high school Chinese, forming a complete and orderly high school composition teaching system. The learning thought emphasizes "seven combinations", the combination of teaching materials and materials, the combination of teaching plans and learning plans, the combination of ability and quality, the combination of theme activities and curriculum objectives, the combination of thinking training and style training, the combination of fragment writing and whole writing, and the combination of writing and correction. Good teaching materials, like talking with experts for a long time, have the value of one for ten. They are like the commanding heights in military affairs. If they occupy it, nothing else will be said.
A series of books of composition study plan
2. Teacher training course
The level of composition is an important standard for students to learn Chinese knowledge and evaluate Chinese literacy. In high school, composition is not only a test of students' creative thinking, but also an important embodiment of their ability to grasp and use language. It can be said that composition quality is an important aspect of high school Chinese teaching effect. As an important stage of basic education, composition teaching in senior high school is an indispensable part of the promotion of Chinese knowledge and ability, which plays an important role in the promotion of students' Chinese ability. It is easy to see the importance of composition teaching in Chinese teaching from the score of composition in college entrance examination and the proportion of composition in Chinese test paper.
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Book purchase benefits
Buy any composition study plan, and give a full set of composition class VIP card (only the top 20 students are allowed to buy). The composition class VIP card is Professor Gao Chaojun's composition video class, including: 8 class hours for narration, 8 class hours for argumentation, 8 class hours for lyric, 16 class hours for the entrance examination composition test strategy, worth 1980 yuan.
3. Reference for students' composition correction
Famous teacher's pulse and prescription
Comments on famous teachers' compositions 1
[test questions]
According to the following materials, choose the angle, draw up the title and write an article of no less than 800 words.
Some people feel sad about the sunset because "the sunset is infinitely good, just near dusk".
Some people admire the sunset because it knows how to make itself a sunrise in another direction.
[student composition]
Change the angle to be sunrise
Facing the gorgeous sunset and the red sun in the west, the poet wrote "the sunset is infinitely good, just near the dusk". I think, it's not only to express the regret that the sunset is beautiful but can't be enjoyed as much as possible, but also to associate myself with it. It's helpless that time is fleeting and I can't enjoy the joy of life. (when you come up, you should integrate the materials and explain the connotation of the materials in poetic and picturesque language. You can understand accurately and brilliantly, and you will know that you are a person who can write articles.)
In fact, there is no absolute beginning and absolute termination. Sometimes, from another angle, the sunset is the rising sun, and the end of life is a new starting point. (after reading the materials, put forward your own point of view to make it clear to the teacher.)
Gong Zizhen left Beijing, his heart should be filled with the sadness and melancholy of the end. In the dusk of life, the haunting of sorrow is the normal state of human feelings, but he did not immerse himself in it. Instead, he said, "falling red is not a ruthless thing, but a spring mud to protect flowers." A sweep of the cold haze of desolation and desolation has set the red self at a new starting point. It's heartbreaking to see yourself from another angle and to see flowers with the eyes of seeing mud. Spring mud is the best thing to protect flowers. It's a blooming spring to integrate your nutrition into new flowers. ("use the eyes of appreciating flowers" and "use the eyes of seeing mud". The angle of seeing things has changed, and the words have also changed. Wonderful!
Know how to let oneself look around the wider at the end and find a new starting point, so that they will not be trapped in the cage of the end and sigh. Everything moves forward in the samsara, just as the sunset is another sunrise. If you set yourself in the sunset forever, you will lose the chance to become the sunrise again. Some people will question, life is fixed, birth is the starting point, death is the end, what reincarnation can be said. But I would say that the reincarnation of life does not lie in the body, but in the spirit. As long as the spirit exists, life will not end. Gong Zizhen uses her dusk to cultivate the next generation of talents. How can the continuation of this spirit not be reincarnation? It's her It is this samsara that is still praised by us thousands of years later. He found a new starting point for himself and made himself a sunrise again.
No matter what situation we are in, we are the rising sun. By comparison, "Gong Zizhen leaves Beijing after leaving office. She should be filled with sadness and melancholy at the end of her life. In the dusk of her life, the haunting of sadness is the normal state of human feelings, but he is not immersed in it..." How nice to say. Do you remember how I said "different tips and different thinking" accurately and smoothly Mr. Muxin once said: "the so-called bottomless abyss is a long way ahead." When others are lamenting that we can't climb out of this abyss, we can change our direction and go deeper, find new beauty and get a new starting point. If Gong Zizhen still takes being an official as his direction of development, I'm afraid that in the end, he will only be tired physically and mentally, trapped in the dusk and can't write that inspiring poem.
Don't sigh "it's just near dusk", but understand that "turning into spring mud to protect flowers". From another angle, we can all become the most dynamic sunrise. (close the composition materials again to strengthen your own point of view, round the end.)
[teacher evaluation]
The full text only uses "the falling red is not the ruthless thing, turns into the spring mud to protect the flower more." The core materials of a sentence are analyzed and discussed from different perspectives, and the truth is more thorough. The article is also concentrated and compact. Compared with the frequent examples, it is much better to write fragmented articles. It can be seen that as long as you are good at analysis, you don't need to give more examples to write argumentative papers. Comprehensive score: 62 points.
Famous teacher's pulse and prescription
Comments on famous teachers' compositions 2
[questions]
According to the following materials, choose the angle, draw up the title, write an article of no less than 800 words; the style is unlimited, except poetry.
Beidao, the poet, once lamented that we live in an era without details. The era of commercialization and entertainment is removing details from people's lives.
[student composition]
Turn off the details
Beidao, the poet, once painfully pointed out that in an era without details, the commercialization and entertainment era are removing details from people's lives. I want to say, at the same time, we live in an era of detail explosion. (starting from the materials, it conforms to the general writing method of new materials composition, OK.)
This is an era of information explosion. The speed of new media with optical cable (what is "the speed of optical cable" In the past decade, it has been transforming the world. Small optical fiber will input billions of words and pictures into our computer terminals. This directly leads to the rapid expansion of commercialization and entertainment. Director's second child, actor's illegitimate son, singer's mistress When these commercial information and entertainment news let us escape from afar, when social life can be sketched, emotion can be hardcover, when Lu Xun's "infinite distance" and "endless people" are really "related to me", how can we not explode? (Lu Xun's remark is very persuasive to prove his point of view. Great!)
It's a way to simplify. (the lack of transition before entering the specific elaboration seems quite abrupt. Note: other articles have the same problem.) Why did Beidao denounce "no details"? Because contemporary only "fine", but no "Festival"! All the details go straight to the brain along our spinal neurons. We should have refused! Jobs was a minimalist. There was only one bed, a desk, a Tiffany lamp and a picture of Einstein in his bedroom. "It's more difficult to be minimalist than complex," he said He simplified all his pursuits into Einstein's portraits, which is the real "detail" and "section".
Turn miscellaneous into true ("miscellaneous" and "true" are not opposites. How about "eliminate the false and save the true" Another way. Contemporary "details" are full of too many "fake Festivals" and even overflowing and exploding. If the value of life is to create and experience, then pure heart is both indispensable. If the wind of social justice is in action (can you change a more explicit word?) How can there be so many exaggerated "details" in the transmission of the love of the child? Americans strive to raise their arms and shout "equality" and "freedom", but Japanese writers who are not good at small patterns have also repeatedly won Nobel prizes. Why? "Delicate brushwork, real emotion," said the speech to Kawabata Yasunari What's the point of comparison
Of course, as the masses and as the individuals who form the society, it is not enough to criticize. As Marx said, "society produces people, and people also produce society." When we are keen to dig other people's privacy and peep into other people's secrets, we are not qualified to criticize the details explosion. When we are impetuous and insincere, we are not qualified to criticize the details. When we blindly pursue "infinite distance" and "endless people" but ignore ourselves, we are not qualified to criticize the details explosion. Only starting from oneself, starting from individual, starting from local, can we completely eradicate the false fire of details flooding in the era. (it's a good idea to dig deeper and make the argument stable.)
Put out the fire for the details. May we live a "fine" and a "Festival".
[teacher evaluation]
Writing this kind of article, from another point of view, is entirely possible. Jiangsu college entrance examination composition review especially likes this kind of article that "tells the truth that you think" as long as you speak well, can justify yourself, can tell the truth, and often can get high scores.
This article has the consciousness of layered discussion, and the large framework of the article is very good. It shows that the author has the basic quality of writing the argumentative paper of this new material.
The problem is, you don't seem to be talking about "details explosion," but "letters."